Comments for A Dance in Silent Violins

Comment on Metaphor by abhinav

abhinav — Mon, 02 Jun 2008 03:36:59 +0000

your words are magical. they echo.

“And yes, she went down dancing
To the tunes of a fall. Enchanted.
Upon the fingers of the lesser known kids”
it echoes

Comment on Surrender by T. Eyre

T. Eyre — Wed, 28 Mar 2007 02:06:08 +0000

"Time
like curtains on his windows"

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Unforgettable.

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Telula Eyre

Comment on Love Hymns – 2 by Edseverripit

Edseverripit — Sun, 10 Dec 2006 02:50:50 +0000

This one jumps from organized to disorganized rhythms and everything, but it’s perfect that way

Comment on Love Hymns – 2 by osblake

osblake — Fri, 10 Nov 2006 14:39:13 +0000

Your writing is powerful but I’m kinda put off by the literalness of it. By having such accurate descriptions it doesn’t let my imagination work as freely as it would like. Will check back to see more tho

Comment on Love Hymns – 2 by calamity

calamity — Sun, 22 Oct 2006 01:17:02 +0000

thank you for posting your masterpieces. you’ll be hearing from me i ensure you
i always smile you just make sure you do the same

Comment on Love Hymns – 2 by The Clown

The Clown — Fri, 13 Oct 2006 11:01:35 +0000

Thanks, Calamity. It’s good to hear from you once again. Smile.

Comment on Love Hymns – 2 by calamity

calamity — Fri, 13 Oct 2006 10:59:27 +0000

it is so nice to see you post again, i haven’t kept track on your blogs, but still i didn’t have that much catching up to do. every word that i would say about your writing would sound trivial. you amaze me

Comment on Facades of The Carnival – 3 by calamity

calamity — Tue, 22 Aug 2006 02:41:09 +0000

the endind reminded me of this book i once read and forgot the title: an image there was that as long as someone had remembered the main characters (who were dead in the hell) they could see what is happening in the world, so they practicly still lived as long as they were in a memory of someone, i always liked that idea, and your poem reminded me of it and i must say that this time the image was more beautiful

Comment on She Had Left A Bubble Inside Me by calamity

calamity — Tue, 22 Aug 2006 02:38:31 +0000

don’t got here, don’t call them useless, they could never be that as long as someone has found them beautiful, soulful and inspiring and i have done so, really beautiful. i’m really looking forward to the new posts and i am happy that you found my coments valuable.
btw you left me with so many questions, but that doesn’t matter we wonder through our entire life

Comment on She Had Left A Bubble Inside Me by The Clown

The Clown — Mon, 21 Aug 2006 17:02:09 +0000

Calamity: Thanks. I'm really grateful that you read so many of my useless pieces and left back your valuable comments.

Unacknowledged Genius: I guess I've started to wonder 'bout the same thing. Thanks for your kind words.

I've been a little busy for the last few days but wish to catch up on all your respective blogs as soon as possible.w